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My dreamcatcher
dances in the wind
I hear your song
Er stand vor der Bank. Setzte sich.
Schüttelte den Kopf. Sie war nicht da.
Er hatte sie sonst jede Tag gesehen,
auf der Bank, mit Zettel und
Stift. Gestern endlich hatte er sie ge-
fragt, was sie da schreibe. "Ein Gedicht",
hatte sie gesagt, und er hatte gelacht.
Heute war sie nicht mehr da. Der
Reißverschluss knarrte. Er nahm Zettel und
Stift aus seiner Tasche, überlegte, schrieb
den ersten Buchstaben.
"Was schreibst du da?" Er blickte auf,
sah sie vor sich stehen, die Tasche
über der Schulter. Er lächelte.
"Ein Gedicht", sagte er.
Ein Gedicht
For the Poetry-on-the-mind's weekly prompt "Vice versa". A postcard story. Translates as:

A poem

He was standing in front of the bench. Sat down.
Shook his head. She wasn't there. He had seen her
every day, always, on this bench,
holding pen and paper. Yesterday, finally, he had
asked her what she was writing. "A poem," she'd said,
and he had laughed. Today, she was not here.
The zipper of his bag zirrped loudly. He took
pen and paper, thoughtful, and wrote the
first letter.
"What are you writing?" He looked up, saw
her standing in front of him. He smiled.
"A poem," he said.
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Rika blickte hinaus auf den See. Die
Sonne brannte orange auf der glatten
Wasseroberfläche, und ihre Zehen malten
kleine Wellenkreise.
"Weißt du", sagte sie und lehnte sich an
die Schulter des sonnenwarmen Körpers
neben sich, "du bist wirklich mein aller-
bester Freund." Eine nasse Zunge fuhr
über Rikas Gesicht, und der Schwanz
klopfte rhytmisch auf die Holzplanken.
Der Duft der Brennnessel
Another postcard story! That would be a story short enough to fit on a postcard. Translates as follows:

Stinging nettle's smell

Rika looked out across the lake. The
setting sun burnt orange on the smoth
surface, and her toes painted small
wave circles.
"You know," she said, leaning against the
shoulder of the sunwarmed body next to hers,
"you really are my best friend." A wet tongue
lapped at her face, and the tail was thumping
rhytmically against the wooden planks.



'cause there's no better friend than a dog, right?^^
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Regarde, ces ailes
elles ne savent pas voler
ni coeur, ni ciel.
Sous les nuages
French poem is french.

Look, these wings
they don't know how to fly/steal
neither heart, nor sky.

The french word "voler" can mean both "to fly" and "to steal". It's a pun. So sue me^^ Inspired by ProjectChained
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No, seriously. I finally finished that book I kept rambling about, and I did upload it on amazon. So, to

all of you who speak German: Please, please buy it! It's only, like 3,22€, and has 300+ pages. It's high/dark fantasy, and the story is about... you know what?
Check it out yourselves!
www.amazon.de/Schattenpriester…
I published it using a pen name, and I really hope it finds people who enjoy it. I'm also participating in the kindle storyteller award, so any review would be helpful! Only the books with intriguing ideas and lots of reviews will get made into audiobooks... and I would SO love to have my own story read out to me!
Great many thanks go to fallingSarah, who designed the cover for me, and was very patient with everything and anything I asked of her!
No, seriously. I finally finished that book I kept rambling about, and I did upload it on amazon. So, to

all of you who speak German: Please, please buy it! It's only, like 3,22€, and has 300+ pages. It's high/dark fantasy, and the story is about... you know what?
Check it out yourselves!
www.amazon.de/Schattenpriester…
I published it using a pen name, and I really hope it finds people who enjoy it. I'm also participating in the kindle storyteller award, so any review would be helpful! Only the books with intriguing ideas and lots of reviews will get made into audiobooks... and I would SO love to have my own story read out to me!
Great many thanks go to fallingSarah, who designed the cover for me, and was very patient with everything and anything I asked of her!

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Yeah no, not telling you ;D
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I am alive, and have been for some time now^^ I live in Germany most of the time, sometimes in Arizona or France. Sometimes in London.
Mostly, I write poems, in about as many languages as I can speak. Oh, and recently, I've taken up knitting. And also sculpting with polymer clay.
I have a dog. His name is Commander Sock von den Mühlbachauen, he's an Eurasier, and about as cute and cuddly as he looks!
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:iconserendiipitii:
Serendiipitii Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the support, I really appreciate it!
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Weidenlied Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're welcome!
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xxNostalgic Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Professional Artisan Crafter
Hi~ Did you receive my note with the pictures of your Salamon doll? 
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Weidenlied Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yup, I did, just had no time to look at them yet. Will do soo, though, no worries!
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b4k4-san Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank ye kindly for the fav :)
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Weidenlied Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:) You're welcome!
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Shangry-Ia Featured By Owner May 18, 2016
Aww, Dein neues icon <3
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Weidenlied Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Babyspock^^ Danke!
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Shangry-Ia Featured By Owner May 18, 2016
Echt süß <3
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zuko4444 Featured By Owner May 17, 2016   Writer
Thanks for the :+fav: on my poem! :D
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